Speaking Feedback Date: 2017/05/31 Evaluator: Sungtae Kim Speaker: Hajun kim Assignment/Title: Second Major Assignment
1. What was the speakers strongest main point? The speaker introduced about a sports club in HUFS. He separated the speech into three parts and used some pictures for each part of the speech. 2. What did you like about the presentation? The presentation is well organized because the speaker separated the speech into three parts. It was interesting to listen to his speech. 3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The speech gave adequate information about the topic. I haven’t even heard this club but the speech made me know several useful facts about the sports club. 4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes, it did. He tried to memorize the speech and used good presentation, which is helpful for understanding the speech. 5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? The voice was loud enough to understand and the pronunciation was also good. 6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion? He opened the speech by telling the audience about a club and introduced things he was going to talk about. He concluded by restating the main point of the speech. Also he invited the audience to join the sports club. 7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. He used a lot of eye contact, but didn’t use any note. 8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? If he used some notes to remind him things to talk about it would have make the speech much more fluent. But it was perfect on the organization or tones. Thank you for sharing this speech:)
Speech Feedback Date: 2017.06.01 Evaluator: Wooseong Kim Speaker: Hajun Kim Assignment/Title: Hajun Kim / 2nd major assignment / thr 12
Speech Value-1 He spoke well without script but if he had practiced more for his speech, I believe the speech would have been better.
Preparation-1 I have no doubt that he spents lots of time preparing for his speech as he used visual aids and spoke without the script.
Organization-1 The speech was organized well with appropriate opening, body, and conclusion.
Opening - 1, He started with a question to get attention of the audiences.
Body - 1, He talked about what rowing club in HUFS is and why we should join in it.
Conclusion- 1, He ended with a quotation from someone unknown. It would have been better if he had let us know from where the quotation came.
Transitions- As far as I’m concerned, it was well-organized speech and there’s nothing to blame about the flow.
What did you like about the presentation?
I felt veracity for his speech. He seemed to truly recommend to join in rowing club to the audiences by making consistent eye contacts with audience and enunciating the words slowly. It was a good speech !
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 2017/05/31
Evaluator: Sungtae Kim
Speaker: Hajun kim
Assignment/Title: Second Major Assignment
1. What was the speakers strongest main point?
The speaker introduced about a sports club in HUFS. He separated the speech into three parts and used some pictures for each part of the speech.
2. What did you like about the presentation?
The presentation is well organized because the speaker separated the speech into three parts. It was interesting to listen to his speech.
3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The speech gave adequate information about the topic. I haven’t even heard this club but the speech made me know several useful facts about the sports club.
4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, it did. He tried to memorize the speech and used good presentation, which is helpful for understanding the speech.
5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
The voice was loud enough to understand and the pronunciation was also good.
6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
He opened the speech by telling the audience about a club and introduced things he was going to talk about. He concluded by restating the main point of the speech. Also he invited the audience to join the sports club.
7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
He used a lot of eye contact, but didn’t use any note.
8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If he used some notes to remind him things to talk about it would have make the speech much more fluent. But it was perfect on the organization or tones.
Thank you for sharing this speech:)
Speech Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 2017.06.01
Evaluator: Wooseong Kim
Speaker: Hajun Kim
Assignment/Title: Hajun Kim / 2nd major assignment / thr 12
Speech Value-1 He spoke well without script but if he had practiced more for his speech, I believe the speech would have been better.
Preparation-1 I have no doubt that he spents lots of time preparing for his speech as he used visual aids and spoke without the script.
Organization-1 The speech was organized well with appropriate opening, body, and conclusion.
Opening - 1, He started with a question to get attention of the audiences.
Body - 1, He talked about what rowing club in HUFS is and why we should join in it.
Conclusion- 1, He ended with a quotation from someone unknown. It would have been better if he had let us know from where the quotation came.
Transitions- As far as I’m concerned, it was well-organized speech and there’s nothing to blame about the flow.
What did you like about the presentation?
I felt veracity for his speech. He seemed to truly recommend to join in rowing club to the audiences by making consistent eye contacts with audience and enunciating the words slowly. It was a good speech !