Speaking Feedback Date :5/27 Evaluator: Na Yeon Lim Speaker: Hyunseok Noh Assignment/Title : Hyunseok Noh/Second Major Assignment/Thurs 34 1. What was the speakers strongest main point? His selection of topic was intriguing to the audiences who are looking forward to summer vacation. 2. What did you like about the presentation? He had a clear subject and a structure, and used the ppt effectively. 3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The audiences could understand festivals with his use of photos in the powerpoint slides. It helped understanding. 4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes, it was overally well prepared. 5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? His pacing was good, so I could understand his speech well. 6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes, he had four festivals to introduce, and he introduced them one by one. It was easy to follow along his speech. 7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. He had a pretty good eye contact with the audience. 8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I believe he could have talked a bit louder and emphasized main points more during his speech. 9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole? It was an informative and interesting presentation. I could see that he prepared a lot for this second major assignment. Also, his enthusiasm for the subject was evident.
Speech Feedback Date: 2017.06.02 Evaluator: Joon Bum Kim Speaker: HyeonSeok Nho Assignment/Title: Organize your speech
Speech Value-1, Interesting topic as beer itself is famous among our current age group.
Preparation- 1, It was adequately prepared
Organization- 1, Well organized, clear opening, body and conclusion
Opening – 1, Smooth transition from HUFS festival to beer festival. Caught attention by starting off with your our school’s festival.
Body – 1, explained 4 different beer festivals.
Conclusion- 1, Summed up the festivals and added person opinions.
Transitions- 1, Well use of transition
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? I think there was a problem in the room or in the camera itself because in some point I could not clearly hear the voice of the speaker. Also, rather than just delineating the details, he could have added some interesting organizations such as by comparing different festivals and analysing their pros and cons.
What did you like about the presentation? Well it was a very interesting topic. I was able to know new informations so it was really helpful. He looked confident when speaking as well. Overall very good presentation.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :5/27
Evaluator: Na Yeon Lim
Speaker: Hyunseok Noh
Assignment/Title : Hyunseok Noh/Second Major Assignment/Thurs 34
1. What was the speakers strongest main point?
His selection of topic was intriguing to the audiences who are looking forward to summer vacation.
2. What did you like about the presentation?
He had a clear subject and a structure, and used the ppt effectively.
3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The audiences could understand festivals with his use of photos in the powerpoint slides. It helped understanding.
4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, it was overally well prepared.
5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
His pacing was good, so I could understand his speech well.
6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, he had four festivals to introduce, and he introduced them one by one. It was easy to follow along his speech.
7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
He had a pretty good eye contact with the audience.
8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I believe he could have talked a bit louder and emphasized main points more during his speech.
9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
It was an informative and interesting presentation. I could see that he prepared a lot for this second major assignment. Also, his enthusiasm for the subject was evident.
Speech Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 2017.06.02
Evaluator: Joon Bum Kim
Speaker: HyeonSeok Nho
Assignment/Title: Organize your speech
Speech Value-1, Interesting topic as beer itself is famous among our current age group.
Preparation- 1, It was adequately prepared
Organization- 1, Well organized, clear opening, body and conclusion
Opening – 1, Smooth transition from HUFS festival to beer festival. Caught attention by starting off with your our school’s festival.
Body – 1, explained 4 different beer festivals.
Conclusion- 1, Summed up the festivals and added person opinions.
Transitions- 1, Well use of transition
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think there was a problem in the room or in the camera itself because in some point I could not clearly hear the voice of the speaker. Also, rather than just delineating the details, he could have added some interesting organizations such as by comparing different festivals and analysing their pros and cons.
What did you like about the presentation?
Well it was a very interesting topic. I was able to know new informations so it was really helpful. He looked confident when speaking as well. Overall very good presentation.