CATEGORY RATING COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS Evaluator: Hyowon Yun Speech Value - 4 Very unique and interesting topic with clear examples. I could feel that you've tried your best to connect your story with the audience by constantly checking if they are understanding your speech by pausing and tone-regulating. Preparation - 4 Except few murmurings, It seemed like you've practiced hard for this real speech. I'm not sure if you've taken pauses frequently on purpose during the speech or not, but I think they've worked effectively on delivering your points with ease to the audience. Organization - 4 Your speech stayed on track all the time with no irrelevant sub-topics or examples. You've consisted your speech with a very nicely-packed evidence and examples so it was interesting to hear :) Opening - 4 Your opening was clear but I think there are many more different creative ways with which you can start your speech with, so I suggest using some unique and unheard-of-opening skills next time you are giving out your presentation. Body - 4 You've well-organized your speech with strong supporting points and I've felt like you've delieved your speech as you've structured well. Conclusion - 4 You had a very clear and nicely-structured conclusion. Transitions - 5 I liked how you've naturally moved on to next points in your body paragraphs. You didn't make any big mistakes when telling your sentences and the flow was natural and clear. Making good transitions would have been very hard this time, because the speech is over 5 minutes, but I think you did a great job on this! well done :) What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Next time, try using some more active body movements or hand jestures or facial expressions to add animation to your speech. And I think It would be extra-better if you raise your voice tone a little bit to sound more lively. What did you like about the presentation? I see you've gotten rid of all alot of weak points of your past speeches. I could see you trying your best when talking, and even if you've gotten stuck, you've fluently moved on to next points to create a good flow in your speech. Your presentation was well-delivered and well done!
Speaking Feedback Date : 2017/5/30 Evaluator: Park So Yeon/Tue 11 Speaker: Jimin Choi Assignment/Title : Major Assignment
1. What was the speakers strongest main point? Volunteer Work 2. What did you like about the presentation? It was an interesting topic with interesting suggestions 3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Very well 4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes 5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes she did 6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes 7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She made good eye contact and but looked at some notes 8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would have been better if she had visual effects 9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole? She talked slowly and loudly which allowed the audience to understand well. Also, she had an interesting topic.
CATEGORY RATING COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
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Speech Value - 4
Very unique and interesting topic with clear examples. I could feel that you've tried your best to connect your story with the audience by constantly checking if they are understanding your speech by pausing and tone-regulating.
Preparation - 4
Except few murmurings, It seemed like you've practiced hard for this real speech. I'm not sure if you've taken pauses frequently on purpose during the speech or not, but I think they've worked effectively on delivering your points with ease to the audience.
Organization - 4
Your speech stayed on track all the time with no irrelevant sub-topics or examples. You've consisted your speech with a very nicely-packed evidence and examples so it was interesting to hear :)
Opening - 4
Your opening was clear but I think there are many more different creative ways with which you can start your speech with, so I suggest using some unique and unheard-of-opening skills next time you are giving out your presentation.
Body - 4
You've well-organized your speech with strong supporting points and I've felt like you've delieved your speech as you've structured well.
Conclusion - 4
You had a very clear and nicely-structured conclusion.
Transitions - 5
I liked how you've naturally moved on to next points in your body paragraphs. You didn't make any big mistakes when telling your sentences and the flow was natural and clear. Making good transitions would have been very hard this time, because the speech is over 5 minutes, but I think you did a great job on this! well done :)
What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Next time, try using some more active body movements or hand jestures or facial expressions to add animation to your speech. And I think It would be extra-better if you raise your voice tone a little bit to sound more lively.
What did you like about the presentation?
I see you've gotten rid of all alot of weak points of your past speeches. I could see you trying your best when talking, and even if you've gotten stuck, you've fluently moved on to next points to create a good flow in your speech. Your presentation was well-delivered and well done!
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Date : 2017/5/30
Evaluator: Park So Yeon/Tue 11
Speaker: Jimin Choi
Assignment/Title : Major Assignment
1. What was the speakers strongest main point?
Volunteer Work
2. What did you like about the presentation?
It was an interesting topic with interesting suggestions
3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Very well
4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes
5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes she did
6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes
7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She made good eye contact and but looked at some notes
8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been better if she had visual effects
9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
She talked slowly and loudly which allowed the audience to understand well. Also, she had an interesting topic.