Saturday, May 27, 2017

Sungtae Kim/ Major Assignment/ Thursday 1~2

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  1. 201303867 Ka Pui CheungMay 30, 2017 at 9:57 PM

    Speaking Feedback
    Date : 30-5-2017
    Evaluator: Ka Pui Cheung
    Speaker: Sungtae Kim
    Assignment/Title : Second Major Assignment-Is SNS Beneficial

    1 = Excellent
    2 = Above average for the speaker's experience level
    3 = Satisfactory
    4 = Could improve
    5 = Needs attention

    Speech Value - 1
    The speaker provided some strong ideas to prove SNS is beneficial in this presentation. Most of us had experiences in using SNS. Therefore, this topic really attracts the audiences to listen his speech.
    Preparation - 1
    He prepared the speech aid (ppt) for helping the audience to understand the speech. Also, he memorized the speech and had so many eye contacts with audiences.
    Organization - 1
    I think his presentation was well-organized with clear opening, body and conclusion.
    Opening - 1
    He talked about every tool has its purpose to start his speech which can grab the audiences’ attention to listen his speech.
    Body - 1
    He was well-organized his speech with strong supporting points.
    Conclusion - 1
    He summed up his points and gave the concluding remarks in the conclusion which can help the audience to remember his speech.
    Transitions - 1
    He used the ‘first, second, third’ which I think it is clear to see the transition of the speech.
     What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    He did a really great job in every aspects but it would be better to add some pausing and stresses in the speech.
     What did you like about the presentation?
    He gave some interesting ideas to support his stand which is really impressive.

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  2. Speech Feedback
    Date : 1/6, 2017
    Evaluator: Sangwon Park
    Speaker: Sungtae Kim
    Assignment/Title : Sungtae Kim/ Major Assignment/ Thursday 1~2

    Speech Value: 1. His topic is important to the modern society where many people use SNS.
    Preparation: 1. the usage of note was made me give 2, but the other thing was so good. So, I gave point 1
    Organization: 1. He was organized the opening, body, and closer well.
    Opening: 1. He started with some talking for attention. That was effective.
    Body: 2. the ppt content helped me understand his speech. his speech about benefit of sns transmissed well.
    close : 1. his quotation use was impressive. so I gave 1.
    Transitions: 1. he clearly convey his speech.
    What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    - reducing the using note.
    What did you like about the presentation?
    - his powerful and active voice was attracted to concentrate his speech.

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