Wednesday, May 31, 2017

Sumin Park/major/thurs 3,4

https://youtu.be/DE3Q1kUEr54

2 comments:

  1. Speech Feedback
    Date: 2017.06.01
    Evaluator: Seounho Kim
    Speaker: Sumin Park
    Assignment/Title: Sumin Park/Major/Thurs 34

    Speech Value-1, Her speech was about euthanasia which was about suggesting her opinion about it. I could get a chance of thinking about euthanasia.

    Preparation- 1, She memorized almost every line of her speech so I could see how well she prepared for her speech. Also she made PPT that showed main point of her speech effectively.

    Organization- 1, She first introduced about euthanasia and then mentioned two major reasons for being against euthanasia. At last she ended her presentation by using movies related to her topic

    Opening - 1, She opened her speech by introducing what euthanasia is

    Body - 1, In body she talked about two major reasons for being opposed to euthanasia

    Conclusion- 1, In conclusion part she talked about two topic-related movies which were ‘Me Before You’ and ‘Bucket List’ to help audience understand her overall speech and idea in it.

    Transitions- 1, I was able to pick up her speech as it was well organized and delivered.

    What did you like about the presentation?

    Personally I also became interested in euthanasia through a movie ‘Me Before You’, which she mentioned at the end of her speech. It was really nice to share and compare ideas from different person

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  2. Speech Feedback
    Date: 2017.06.01
    Evaluator: Wooseong Kim
    Speaker: Sumin Park
    Assignment/Title: Sumin Park/Major/Thurs 34

    Speech Value-1 She spoke about her opinion on euthanasia and it was persuasive enough to make me think again about ‘should we permit euthanasia?’ and the human right.

    Preparation- 1, She used visual aids well ( the powerpoint was clear without intricate detilas), and spoke without scripts. She memorized all the words she prepared and spoke without big mistakes. I’m sure she prepared long for this speech

    Organization- She firstly showed the definition of ‘euthanasia’ to help the understanding of audiences and talked about her opinion and reasons. She also concluded the speech with suggestions. In short, she organized the speech well.

    Opening - 1, Her opening was about the definition of ‘euthanasia’ and its origination

    Body - 1, She talked about her opinion on euthanasia and 2 major reasons

    Conclusion- 1, She tried to get attention of the audiences by showing 2 movies related to her topic. At the very last, she made a suggestion to the audiences.

    Transitions- It was well-organized speech and there’s nothing awkward about the flow.

    What did you like about the presentation?

    What I liked the most is her conclusion. She talked about somewhat serious topic (euthanasia), but at the last, she introduced 2 impressive movies and told the audiences to live everyday positively and with happiness. Needless to say the content of overall speech, the conclusion was enough to make the speech difficult to forget.

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