Speech Feedback Date : June 1, 2017 Evaluator: MinJee Kim Speaker: Joon Bum Kim Assignment/Title : Controversy of Sports Agent
1. Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience): 1, I could see that he was very interested in the topic itself. He stated the problems and gave solution. He introduced a very special topic that not everybody is aware of. It was interesting.
2. Preparation (Research, rehearsal): 1, He seemed well prepared.
3. Organization (Logical, clear): 1, He had clear opening, body, and conclusion.
4. Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic): 1, He used a short visual material to grab the attention. It was effective.
5. Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material): 1, He stated what is a sports agent and the problem that they have. It was great that he also stated the solution to the problem as well.
6. Conclusion (Effective): 1, He talks about his hopes and dreams and related that to his topic. It wrapped up the speech nicely and connected the topic to his personal level.
7. Transitions (appropriate, helpful): He had great transition words that allowed me to follow easily.
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Maybe he could pace the whole speech a bit up. I personally prefer a bright and fast paced speech. I would have enjoyed it more if he spoke a bit faster. There were sometimes that I thought that I was losing focus. But that is probably my problem! It was great overall!
* What did you like about the presentation? He used great examples. It is hard to actually include very specific details with names and quotes, but he did it. I could see his interest in the topic so I really enjoyed it with him. Thank you for your great speech!
I am sorry for my slightly late posting. Also, I accidently uploaded my video upside down ;(
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Evaluator: MinJee Kim
Speaker: Joon Bum Kim
Assignment/Title : Controversy of Sports Agent
1. Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience): 1, I could see that he was very interested in the topic itself. He stated the problems and gave solution. He introduced a very special topic that not everybody is aware of. It was interesting.
2. Preparation (Research, rehearsal): 1, He seemed well prepared.
3. Organization (Logical, clear): 1, He had clear opening, body, and conclusion.
4. Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic): 1, He used a short visual material to grab the attention. It was effective.
5. Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material): 1, He stated what is a sports agent and the problem that they have. It was great that he also stated the solution to the problem as well.
6. Conclusion (Effective): 1, He talks about his hopes and dreams and related that to his topic. It wrapped up the speech nicely and connected the topic to his personal level.
7. Transitions (appropriate, helpful): He had great transition words that allowed me to follow easily.
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Maybe he could pace the whole speech a bit up. I personally prefer a bright and fast paced speech. I would have enjoyed it more if he spoke a bit faster. There were sometimes that I thought that I was losing focus. But that is probably my problem! It was great overall!
* What did you like about the presentation?
He used great examples. It is hard to actually include very specific details with names and quotes, but he did it. I could see his interest in the topic so I really enjoyed it with him. Thank you for your great speech!