Title: 2nd Major Assignment Evaluator: Hayoung Lee Presenter: Yohan Seo Date: 2017/ 05/ 31
Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience) 1 It was really meaningful because the speech was not only for the audience but also for himself. His personal examples made the speech even stronger. I will be depressed no more. I will not give up.
Preparation (Research, rehearsal) 1 I could see a lot of prep-work was done for this speech – all those quotes! He must have spent a lot of time thinking about which quote would work best for his speech. One little improvement could be made next time: rather than peeking at the script, it would have been better for him to hold notecards for reference.
Organization (Logical, clear) 1 His transition was clear, and the body was well organized. All of his subtopics ‘encouraged’, as the main message he was trying to give was ‘encouragement’. Both the opening and the conclusion were also
Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic) 2 “Are you a loser?” definitely caught my ears. However, I think the speaker could have paused before continuing with his next sentence. Then, the impact would have been much greater.
Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material) 1 I was impressed how he quoted a verse from the Bible and connected it to his speech. I liked the way his personal beliefs supported his message to the audience. Along with the Bible, he quoted many other figures and those quotes worked well as supporting material. His personal stories came after the quotes, and they were all relevant to his main idea. His story gave a vivid touch to the speech. Also, the elephant story was interesting!
Conclusion (Effective) 1 Don’t worry! Don’t give up! Don’t be depressed! Only, keep smiling! His conclusion was so strong that I can still remember it now. It was super effective and he managed to leave a strong impact. The visual aid showed his ‘slogans’ and it really aided. Great conclusion.
Transitions (appropriate, helpful) 1 First, second, third. Numbers are the clearest signposts.
What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? His opening could have given much more impact to the audience if he had paused right after finishing his first line. Plus, talking more of his personal experiences would have been more effective.
What did you like about the presentation? I liked how he interacted with his audience. I liked his eye contact and body gestures which made his speech more effective and impressive. I liked his speed except for the very beginning. Overall, it was a well organized speech. What I liked the most was how he overcame his stage fright. I saw no signs of nervousness or anxiety. Zero. Considering how much he has improved over the last 14 weeks, it is amazing to see this speech. Wow. I hope to see more of this coming soon in the next semester too! Great work, Yohan!
Speech Feedback Date : June 1, 2017 Evaluator: Hyunseo Jung Speaker: Jeeny Jung Assignment/Title : Whether people should have their dream job 1.Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience It was really great. By this video, I could understand and know her perception of her life. And also as her view was as same as mine, so it was really interesting. 2. Preparation (Research, rehearsal) She prepared visual materials and tried to memorize most of her speech 3. Organization (Logical, clear): She had really clear opening, body, and closing. The composition of her whole speech was really nice 4. Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic She used her own experience to talk about her thought. So it really caught my attention. 5. Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material She explained why we don’t need to settle a clear dream job by analyzing many reason. Also with the interesting visual material, It was easy to follow her thoughts. 6. Conclusion (Effective): She finished her presentation by suggesting some tips for people who don’t have a dream job. I think that part was really nice.
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? she tried hard to memorize most of her speech but it would be better if she interact with the audiences more. And also it would be better if she speaks a little bit slowly. * What did you like about the presentation? The composition of her speech helped me to understand her opinion well, and her calm voice caught my attention. Thank you for sharing your wonderful opinion!
Title: 2nd Major Assignment
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Hayoung Lee
Presenter: Yohan Seo
Date: 2017/ 05/ 31
Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience) 1
It was really meaningful because the speech was not only for the audience but also for himself. His personal examples made the speech even stronger. I will be depressed no more. I will not give up.
Preparation (Research, rehearsal) 1
I could see a lot of prep-work was done for this speech – all those quotes! He must have spent a lot of time thinking about which quote would work best for his speech. One little improvement could be made next time: rather than peeking at the script, it would have been better for him to hold notecards for reference.
Organization (Logical, clear) 1
His transition was clear, and the body was well organized. All of his subtopics ‘encouraged’, as the main message he was trying to give was ‘encouragement’. Both the opening and the conclusion were also
Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic) 2
“Are you a loser?” definitely caught my ears. However, I think the speaker could have paused before continuing with his next sentence. Then, the impact would have been much greater.
Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material) 1
I was impressed how he quoted a verse from the Bible and connected it to his speech. I liked the way his personal beliefs supported his message to the audience. Along with the Bible, he quoted many other figures and those quotes worked well as supporting material. His personal stories came after the quotes, and they were all relevant to his main idea. His story gave a vivid touch to the speech. Also, the elephant story was interesting!
Conclusion (Effective) 1
Don’t worry! Don’t give up! Don’t be depressed! Only, keep smiling! His conclusion was so strong that I can still remember it now. It was super effective and he managed to leave a strong impact. The visual aid showed his ‘slogans’ and it really aided. Great conclusion.
Transitions (appropriate, helpful) 1
First, second, third. Numbers are the clearest signposts.
What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
His opening could have given much more impact to the audience if he had paused right after finishing his first line. Plus, talking more of his personal experiences would have been more effective.
What did you like about the presentation?
I liked how he interacted with his audience. I liked his eye contact and body gestures which made his speech more effective and impressive. I liked his speed except for the very beginning. Overall, it was a well organized speech. What I liked the most was how he overcame his stage fright. I saw no signs of nervousness or anxiety. Zero. Considering how much he has improved over the last 14 weeks, it is amazing to see this speech. Wow. I hope to see more of this coming soon in the next semester too! Great work, Yohan!
Speech Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : June 1, 2017
Evaluator: Hyunseo Jung
Speaker: Jeeny Jung
Assignment/Title : Whether people should have their dream job
1.Speech Value (Interesting, meaningful to audience
It was really great. By this video, I could understand and know her perception of her life. And also as her view was as same as mine, so it was really interesting.
2. Preparation (Research, rehearsal)
She prepared visual materials and tried to memorize most of her speech
3. Organization (Logical, clear):
She had really clear opening, body, and closing. The composition of her whole speech was really nice
4. Opening (Attention-getting, led into topic
She used her own experience to talk about her thought. So it really caught my attention.
5. Body (Flowed smoothly, appropriate support material
She explained why we don’t need to settle a clear dream job by analyzing many reason. Also with the interesting visual material, It was easy to follow her thoughts.
6. Conclusion (Effective):
She finished her presentation by suggesting some tips for people who don’t have a dream job. I think that part was really nice.
* What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
she tried hard to memorize most of her speech but it would be better if she interact with the audiences more. And also it would be better if she speaks a little bit slowly.
* What did you like about the presentation?
The composition of her speech helped me to understand her opinion well, and her calm voice caught my attention. Thank you for sharing your wonderful opinion!