Speech Feedback Date : 2017-05-29 Evaluator: Christina Woo Speaker: Sunyoung Park Assignment/Title : Sunyoung Park/PIE/Thur1-2/Major Assignment 1. Speech Value 1: The speech was very interesting and it had a clear message which was about potential. The speaker’s personal stories were fascinating and sincere. 2. Preparation 1: I could see that the speaker has prepared a lot for this speech. 3. Organization 1: As an audience, I really think the whole speech was well organized. 4. Opening 1: The opening started with a straight forward question about whether we feel comfortable in speaking English in public. I definitely thought it was attention getting. 5. Body 1: The speaker gave clear examples which allowed the audience to visualize the experience that the speaker had. 6. Conclusion 1: I especially liked the conclusion because the speaker gave a good message that everyone could relate to. 7. Transitions 1: The speaker had a smooth transition and it was audible to understand. 8. What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? -It was overall good and I really enjoyed the speech, but if I could mention one thing, I think it would have been better if the speaker had a clearer and stronger eye contact. 9. What did you like about the presentation? -I liked how passionate she was in telling her personal stories, as well as the overall message about potential that she presented to us. She seemed relaxed in giving her speech which I liked!
Speech Feedback Date : May 29, 2017 Evaluator: Janita Wallin Speaker: Sunyoung Park Assignment/Title : Sunyoung Park/PIE/Thur1-2/Major Assignment
1. Speech Value: 1 Really good organized speech. 2. Preparation: 1 Lot of preparations had been done, not only ppt but stories and topic was well prepared 3. Organization: 1 Easy to listen and follow the speaker 4. Opening: 1 It started calmly with a question, really good 5. Body: 1 Many good points, own experience and story, Interesting 6. Conclusion: 1 Powerful 7. Transitions: 1 Smooth transitions
8. What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? - Eye contact was sometimes a bit off and more gestures would have been nice.
9. What did you like about the presentation? - Really good speech, I enjoyed watching and listening to it.
Speech Feedback Date : May 29, 2017 Evaluator: Jang Hajong Speaker: Hayoung Lee Assignment/Title : Hayoung Lee/2nd Major Assignment/Presenting in English Thurs 12
Speech Value: 1 good Preparation: 1. Ppt and some visual things are great Organization: 1. Interesting intro and conclusion. Opening: 1. Clear start Body: 1. interesting Conclusion: 1. Good and clear Transitions: 1. Good. I can easily concentrate on this presetation
-Topic was different and interesting.
What did you like about the presentation? - important things, such as voice, ppt, organization are perfect
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ReplyDeleteDate : 2017-05-29
Evaluator: Christina Woo
Speaker: Sunyoung Park
Assignment/Title : Sunyoung Park/PIE/Thur1-2/Major Assignment
1. Speech Value 1: The speech was very interesting and it had a clear message which was about potential. The speaker’s personal stories were fascinating and sincere.
2. Preparation 1: I could see that the speaker has prepared a lot for this speech.
3. Organization 1: As an audience, I really think the whole speech was well organized.
4. Opening 1: The opening started with a straight forward question about whether we feel comfortable in speaking English in public. I definitely thought it was attention getting.
5. Body 1: The speaker gave clear examples which allowed the audience to visualize the experience that the speaker had.
6. Conclusion 1: I especially liked the conclusion because the speaker gave a good message that everyone could relate to.
7. Transitions 1: The speaker had a smooth transition and it was audible to understand.
8. What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
-It was overall good and I really enjoyed the speech, but if I could mention one thing, I think it would have been better if the speaker had a clearer and stronger eye contact.
9. What did you like about the presentation?
-I liked how passionate she was in telling her personal stories, as well as the overall message about potential that she presented to us. She seemed relaxed in giving her speech which I liked!
Speech Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : May 29, 2017
Evaluator: Janita Wallin
Speaker: Sunyoung Park
Assignment/Title : Sunyoung Park/PIE/Thur1-2/Major Assignment
1. Speech Value: 1 Really good organized speech.
2. Preparation: 1 Lot of preparations had been done, not only ppt but stories and topic was well prepared
3. Organization: 1 Easy to listen and follow the speaker
4. Opening: 1 It started calmly with a question, really good
5. Body: 1 Many good points, own experience and story, Interesting
6. Conclusion: 1 Powerful
7. Transitions: 1 Smooth transitions
8. What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
- Eye contact was sometimes a bit off and more gestures would have been nice.
9. What did you like about the presentation?
- Really good speech, I enjoyed watching and listening to it.
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ReplyDeleteDate : May 29, 2017
Evaluator: Jang Hajong
Speaker: Hayoung Lee
Assignment/Title : Hayoung Lee/2nd Major Assignment/Presenting in English Thurs 12
Speech Value: 1 good
Preparation: 1. Ppt and some visual things are great
Organization: 1. Interesting intro and conclusion.
Opening: 1. Clear start
Body: 1. interesting
Conclusion: 1. Good and clear
Transitions: 1. Good. I can easily concentrate on this presetation
-Topic was different and interesting.
What did you like about the presentation?
- important things, such as voice, ppt, organization are perfect