Generic Presentation Evaluation Video: The Person I Admire the Most Date : Wed 7 Jun Evaluator: Minyong Han
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? : The main purpose of her speech was that she got to be a singer when she got influenced by Boa on TV. And that's how she started to admire her. It was addressed pretty well.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? : There was a hook. She started her speech by asking a question whether we heard of the song 'number 1.' It was effective, because I instantly realized where she was going with this. I don't think it needs improving.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? : She made her structure strong with a lot of stories about herself, and there was enough evidence to back up what she was saying. Transitions between ideas were good.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? : Her conclusion was concise and memorable. And she restated her main points in the conclusion.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.: She used pauses and enthusiasm, but she didn't use humor and visual aids.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. : She was really good with her gestures, and she looked natural. She tried to keep her eye contact with the camera.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? : She was speaking very clearly, and I liked it.
Evaluator: Bochra El Ghali Speaker: Christina Woo Video: The Person I Admire the Most
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? : It was about how she is highly interested by Boa and how she admires her. Not only that but also how that changed her to be an artist.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? : The hook was right in the point which is asking the audience whether they know the song of Boa . Usually giving questions as a hook is like building a strong bridge to communicate with the audience. 3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? : The Transition was clear and well organized . All examples and evidences presented supported strongly her speech. 4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? : Her conclusion was meaningful and impressive . And restating all her points at the end was a good move that makes the overall speech succeed.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.: She doesn’t need the visual aids because I could get everything from her tone and peach. 6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. : Nice eye contact . I couldn’t feel that she was nervous . I like her gestures and her posture was perfect. 7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? : Yes she did delivered her speech in successful way . Good pronunciation and also good sound. Good luck !
Evaluator: MinJee Kim Video: The person that I admire 1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? The overall purpose was to introduce the person that she admires the best. it was well stated.
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? She had great hook to arouse the interest. It was well stated.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? She had logical structure that allows us to follow her speech easily.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? She had concise conclusion.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids? She had enthusiasm and pauses.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. She had good gestures and eye contacts.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? She had great volume and she enunciated well.
Generic Presentation Evaluation
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Date : Wed 7 Jun
Evaluator: Minyong Han
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? :
The main purpose of her speech was that she got to be a singer when she got influenced by Boa on TV. And that's how she started to admire her. It was addressed pretty well.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? :
There was a hook. She started her speech by asking a question whether we heard of the song 'number 1.' It was effective, because I instantly realized where she was going with this. I don't think it needs improving.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? :
She made her structure strong with a lot of stories about herself, and there was enough evidence to back up what she was saying. Transitions between ideas were good.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? :
Her conclusion was concise and memorable. And she restated her main points in the conclusion.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.:
She used pauses and enthusiasm, but she didn't use humor and visual aids.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. :
She was really good with her gestures, and she looked natural. She tried to keep her eye contact with the camera.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? :
She was speaking very clearly, and I liked it.
Generic Presentation Evaluation
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Speaker: Christina Woo
Video: The Person I Admire the Most
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? :
It was about how she is highly interested by Boa and how she admires her. Not only that but also how that changed her to be an artist.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? :
The hook was right in the point which is asking the audience whether they know the song of Boa .
Usually giving questions as a hook is like building a strong bridge to communicate with the audience.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? :
The Transition was clear and well organized . All examples and evidences presented supported strongly her speech.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? :
Her conclusion was meaningful and impressive . And restating all her points at the end was a good move that makes the overall speech succeed.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.:
She doesn’t need the visual aids because I could get everything from her tone and peach.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. :
Nice eye contact . I couldn’t feel that she was nervous . I like her gestures and her posture was perfect.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? :
Yes she did delivered her speech in successful way . Good pronunciation and also good sound. Good luck !
Evaluator: MinJee Kim
ReplyDeleteVideo: The person that I admire
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
The overall purpose was to introduce the person that she admires the best. it was well stated.
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
She had great hook to arouse the interest. It was well stated.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
She had logical structure that allows us to follow her speech easily.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
She had concise conclusion.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids?
She had enthusiasm and pauses.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
She had good gestures and eye contacts.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
She had great volume and she enunciated well.