Evaluator: Seounho Kim Speaker: Hayoung Lee Date: 06.08.2017 Title: Great vacation idea
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
Ther purpose of her speech was introducing her vacation plan to Montreal. It was well addressed as she recommeded some foods and place to visit
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? Yes,there was good hook which is asking questions to the audience and answering for it. It was effective as it caught my attention by triggering curiosity
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? There was a clear division between opening, body and closing was I could say it had logical structure. With interesting categories transitions of the ideas were also great
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
She concluded her speech by recomending visit to Montreal and as she used visual aids effectively the closing was really memorable. It made me want to visit to Montreal as well.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids…
She used her PPT which contained proper pictures and adequate amount of words on it. And her speech pace was good with nice intonation. I could feel the enthusiasm through her smiley face as well
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
She used body language but I think it would be better for her to use more. But her posture was good though she stood still and her eye contact was natural enough. Using more gestures would make her speech better.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
The volume and voice of her speech are things I liked the most among her speech. Pronunciation was clear enough to understand.
Evaluator: Seounho Kim
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Hayoung Lee
Date: 06.08.2017
Title: Great vacation idea
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
Ther purpose of her speech was introducing her vacation plan to Montreal. It was well addressed as she recommeded some foods and place to visit
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
Yes,there was good hook which is asking questions to the audience and answering for it. It was effective as it caught my attention by triggering curiosity
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
There was a clear division between opening, body and closing was I could say it had logical structure. With interesting categories transitions of the ideas were also great
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
She concluded her speech by recomending visit to Montreal and as she used visual aids effectively the closing was really memorable. It made me want to visit to Montreal as well.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids…
She used her PPT which contained proper pictures and adequate amount of words on it. And her speech pace was good with nice intonation. I could feel the enthusiasm through her smiley face as well
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
She used body language but I think it would be better for her to use more. But her posture was good though she stood still and her eye contact was natural enough. Using more gestures would make her speech better.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
The volume and voice of her speech are things I liked the most among her speech. Pronunciation was clear enough to understand.