Generic Presentation Evaluation Video: Person I admire Evaluator: Juyeon Oh
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? : He talked about the person he admires, admiral 'Lee SoonShin'.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? : There was no hook, he just started with what he was going to explain about, the person he admires. It could have been better if he had a simple hook to grab the attention of the audience.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? : The structure was logical, because he gave a brief introduction about the admiral, and some of his achievements during his life time. He added some events to his speech that made him a famous person. The transition was well done as he explained about the reasons why he admires him and the things that he learned.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? : The conclusion was clear and concise. He kept it short and just wrapped up by stating that he admires him and learned a lot from him, which was effective.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.: He did not use humour, but used pauses in between for an effective speech. His pace was good so that he was not too slow or too fast. He didn't use any visual aids but they did not bother me.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. : He only showed the upper part of his body in the video. Throughout his speech, he didn't move very much but he had a good eye contact into the camera, which made him look comfortable delivering his speech.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? : The volume was good and he didn't seem to have any problems with enuciating the words; every part of his speech was understandable. Thank you for sharing your video with us!
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Evaluator: Juyeon Oh
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? :
He talked about the person he admires, admiral 'Lee SoonShin'.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? :
There was no hook, he just started with what he was going to explain about, the person he admires. It could have been better if he had a simple hook to grab the attention of the audience.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? :
The structure was logical, because he gave a brief introduction about the admiral, and some of his achievements during his life time. He added some events to his speech that made him a famous person. The transition was well done as he explained about the reasons why he admires him and the things that he learned.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? :
The conclusion was clear and concise. He kept it short and just wrapped up by stating that he admires him and learned a lot from him, which was effective.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids.:
He did not use humour, but used pauses in between for an effective speech. His pace was good so that he was not too slow or too fast. He didn't use any visual aids but they did not bother me.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. :
He only showed the upper part of his body in the video. Throughout his speech, he didn't move very much but he had a good eye contact into the camera, which made him look comfortable delivering his speech.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? :
The volume was good and he didn't seem to have any problems with enuciating the words; every part of his speech was understandable. Thank you for sharing your video with us!