Evaluator: Ka Pui Cheung Speaker: Yohan Seo Video: A great vacation idea 1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? -The speaker talked about he loves Arthur Conan Doyle and he wants to visit his hometown-London. The speaker introduced the basic information of London, where does he want to visit in London, what does he want to eat, and the recommendation of accommodation. 2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? -A hook is the quotation ‘you would certainly have been burned, had you lived a few centuries ago’. 3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? -Yes, the structure was well-organized, and the transition was smooth. 4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? -He talked about visiting London could gain great experience to meet people and learn the local culture. It would be better to restate the main points again. 5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids, - The speaker used visual aids(ppt and photos) and had a good pace so I can follow his speech easily. 6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. -The speaker had proper body language and but a little bit lacked of eye contact. 7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? -The tone of the speaker’s voice was good and clear, and the volume of the video was good. I understood everything in the video. Thank you for sharing!
Evaluator: Ka Pui Cheung
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Yohan Seo
Video: A great vacation idea
1.What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
-The speaker talked about he loves Arthur Conan Doyle and he wants to visit his hometown-London. The speaker introduced the basic information of London, where does he want to visit in London, what does he want to eat, and the recommendation of accommodation.
2.Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
-A hook is the quotation ‘you would certainly have been burned, had you lived a few centuries ago’.
3.Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
-Yes, the structure was well-organized, and the transition was smooth.
4.Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
-He talked about visiting London could gain great experience to meet people and learn the local culture. It would be better to restate the main points again.
5.Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
- The speaker used visual aids(ppt and photos) and had a good pace so I can follow his speech easily.
6.What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
-The speaker had proper body language and but a little bit lacked of eye contact.
7.Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
-The tone of the speaker’s voice was good and clear, and the volume of the video was good. I understood everything in the video. Thank you for sharing!