1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? The overall purpose of the speech was to teach the audience how to write a great essay. She explained the total of 6steps to follow when writing the essay and gave some detailed and helpful personal advices. The points were very clear to understand and actually very helpful :)
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? The hook was at the very beginning of the speech when she threw the question to the audience to think about. I think it was highly effective because she paused after asking the question to give some time for the listeners to think of the answer. There's no other improvements to be made!
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? The structure was very logical. The points were supported by her personal examples eventhough no specific numbers or research results were given. The transitions were very clear between ideas, because before she move on, she reminded the audience what she was talking about and what she will talk about next. No confusion at all :)
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? The conclusion was very concise and well-organized. I liked how she mentioned once again the 6 steps of writing good essay, to reduce confusion and remind the audience. Very good summary was made with her delivering the goal of her speech directly to the audience. The closing was memorable because I could really see that she wanted to help us with writing the essay!
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids? She smiled frequently with change in the voice tone which made me interested and focuse more on the speech. She paused frequently to give some time for the audience to rethink statements. No particular humor was provided, but the speech itself was entertaining enough with her talking friendly with active facial expressions changing. No visual aids given.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. She had some natural facial expressions and some hand jestures. I liked how she stood straight to face the audience. Very active eye contacts were made, so the audience could focus well on the speaker.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? The volume was good enough. The speaker's pronunciation was actually very good so I had no problem hearing and understanding the entire context of her speech. Nice job! :)
Evaluator: Bochra El Ghali Speaker: Hayoung Lee Video: Unit 4
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? It was mainly about showing and explain how to write a good and effective essay by providing and introducing 6steps to follow when writing the essay accompanied with her personal examples . 2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? The hook was catchy asking the audience considered as a good strategy for a successful speech. She doesn’t need improvement because she already used the required ones. 3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? The structure was logical. The transitions were so clear. I wasn’t neither confused nor distracted. All her points were strongly supported by a good examples. 4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? The conclusion was concise and terse. I liked how she restate all the 6 steps again to remind the audience. The closing was memorable and impressive.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids? Even though she didn’t provide visual aids along with her speech but she succeeded to deliver her speech by using pauses and tone was so interesting. 6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. She did used all body language, posture, eye contact and even gestures well done. It wasn’t distracting and she know how and when to use it. Nice job! 7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? I clearly understood everything. Good pronunciation and clear sound and good volume. Good luck !
Generic Presentation Evaluation
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Hyowon Yun
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
The overall purpose of the speech was to teach the audience how to write a great essay. She explained the total of 6steps to follow when writing the essay and gave some detailed and helpful personal advices. The points were very clear to understand and actually very helpful :)
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
The hook was at the very beginning of the speech when she threw the question to the audience to think about. I think it was highly effective because she paused after asking the question to give some time for the listeners to think of the answer. There's no other improvements to be made!
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
The structure was very logical. The points were supported by her personal examples eventhough no specific numbers or research results were given. The transitions were very clear between ideas, because before she move on, she reminded the audience what she was talking about and what she will talk about next. No confusion at all :)
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
The conclusion was very concise and well-organized. I liked how she mentioned once again the 6 steps of writing good essay, to reduce confusion and remind the audience. Very good summary was made with her delivering the goal of her speech directly to the audience. The closing was memorable because I could really see that she wanted to help us with writing the essay!
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids?
She smiled frequently with change in the voice tone which made me interested and focuse more on the speech. She paused frequently to give some time for the audience to rethink statements. No particular humor was provided, but the speech itself was entertaining enough with her talking friendly with active facial expressions changing. No visual aids given.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
She had some natural facial expressions and some hand jestures. I liked how she stood straight to face the audience. Very active eye contacts were made, so the audience could focus well on the speaker.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
The volume was good enough. The speaker's pronunciation was actually very good so I had no problem hearing and understanding the entire context of her speech. Nice job! :)
Generic Presentation Evaluation
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Bochra El Ghali
Speaker: Hayoung Lee
Video: Unit 4
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
It was mainly about showing and explain how to write a good and effective essay by providing and introducing 6steps to follow when writing the essay accompanied with her personal examples .
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
The hook was catchy asking the audience considered as a good strategy for a successful speech.
She doesn’t need improvement because she already used the required ones.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
The structure was logical. The transitions were so clear. I wasn’t neither confused nor distracted. All her points were strongly supported by a good examples.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
The conclusion was concise and terse. I liked how she restate all the 6 steps again to remind the audience. The closing was memorable and impressive.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids?
Even though she didn’t provide visual aids along with her speech but she succeeded to deliver her speech by using pauses and tone was so interesting.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
She did used all body language, posture, eye contact and even gestures well done. It wasn’t distracting and she know how and when to use it. Nice job!
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
I clearly understood everything. Good pronunciation and clear sound and good volume. Good luck !